Some people feel packaging of goods by manufacturer in supermarket are expensive while, some says that neighborhood should avoid buying of package goods in the supermarket. Discuss both views . Give reason for your answer and include relevant example from your knowledge or experience

There has been a lot of controversy over

price

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the price

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of

goods

that are packaged. Some

individual

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individuals

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said

the

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that

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manufacturers and

the

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apply

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supermarkets should reduce the

amount

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of

packaging

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packaged

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goods

.

while

,

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apply

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others have

there

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their

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opinion that

customer

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customers

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should decline

buying

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to buy

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of repacked

goods

.

Although

packaged items look suitable and reduce customer time for

cross-check

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,

it

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they

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can

also

be unaffordable for some people because of the additional charges for the rebranding done on the

product

thereby preventing equity among consumers.

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will be expatriates in the essay. Packaging of

stuffs

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stuff

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in the shopping mall is very good as it

help

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to make it look attractive to the customers and

reduce

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reduces

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stress for

recheck

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a recheck

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.

for

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instance when you buy beans in the market you will need to pick the unwanted particles in

it

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them

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out before cooking at home ,

this

will save the

person's

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people

person

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from stress. Unlike beans bought from the supermarket that

were

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was

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already picked before packaging. In

another word

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other words

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, rebranding

of

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apply

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goods

can sometimes

expensive

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be expensive

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which will prevent equity among buyers. Because the

manufacturer

want

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wants

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there

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their

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output to be unique they put in some effort to make that

product

accepted in the labour market.in return

of

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for

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their

efforts

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,efforts

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money will be paid

while

those money

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that money

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will

be place

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be placed

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on the

product

resulting in

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an in-filterated

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in-filterated

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in-filtered

in-filtrated

commodity

price

. For there to be equity the

manufacturer

and the mall owner should make some adjustments to add moderate

price

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prices

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on

product

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products

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not ambiguous.

if

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If

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,

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the added

price

is not much the community will continue to patronise them.

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, in the public market buying

of

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apply

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beans is 500 naira and in the shop

its

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it's

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600

naira

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nairas

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since

,

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the difference is not high the

neighborhood

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neighbourhood

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will no longer

thought

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think

be thought

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of not buying stuff in the supermarkets. In conclusion,

due to

the controversy over

packaging

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the packaging

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of

goods

in shops by

manufacturer

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manufacturers

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making it expensive and restrictions of people not to purchase it. I will say that the

manufacturer

have

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has

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alots

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lots

of

adjustment

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adjustments

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to put in place to enable continuity of patronage by not adding much

on

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to

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the materials. The

neighborhood

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neighbourhood

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do

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not need to stop going to the shops to buy their commodity since it's just little differences.