Some people feel packaging of goods by manufacturer in supermarket are expensive while, some says that neighborhood should avoid buying of package goods in the supermarket. Discuss both views . Give reason for your answer and include relevant example from your knowledge or experience
There has been a lot of controversy over
price
of Add an article
the price
goods
that are packaged. Some individual
said Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
the
manufacturers and Correct your spelling
that
the
supermarkets should reduce the Correct article usage
apply
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
packaging
Wrong verb form
packaged
goods
.while
,
others have Remove the comma
apply
there
opinion that Correct your spelling
their
customer
should decline Fix the agreement mistake
customers
buying
of repacked Change the verb form
to buy
goods
.Although
packaged items look suitable and reduce customer time for cross-check
,Wrong verb form
cross-checking
it
can Correct pronoun usage
they
also
be unaffordable for some people because of the additional charges for the rebranding done on the product
thereby preventing equity among consumers.This
will be expatriates in the essay.
Packaging of stuffs
in the shopping mall is very good as it Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
help
to make it look attractive to the customers and Change the verb form
helps
reduce
stress for Correct subject-verb agreement
reduces
recheck
.Add an article
a recheck
for
instance when you buy beans in the market you will need to pick the unwanted particles in Correct your spelling
For
it
out before cooking at home ,Correct pronoun usage
them
this
will save the person's
from stress. Unlike beans bought from the supermarket that Change the noun form
people
person
were
already picked before packaging.
In Change the verb form
was
another word
, rebranding Fix the agreement mistake
other words
of
Change preposition
apply
goods
can sometimes expensive
which will prevent equity among buyers. Because the Add a missing verb
be expensive
manufacturer
want
Change the verb form
wants
there
output to be unique they put in some effort to make that Replace the word
their
product
accepted in the labour market.in return of
their Change preposition
for
efforts
money will be paid Add a comma
,efforts
while
those money
will Change the determiner
that money
be place
on the Change the verb form
be placed
product
resulting in Correct article usage
an in-filterated
in-filterated
commodity Correct your spelling
in-filtered
in-filtrated
price
. For there to be equity the manufacturer
and the mall owner should make some adjustments to add moderate price
on Fix the agreement mistake
prices
product
not ambiguous.Fix the agreement mistake
products
if
Correct your spelling
If
,
the added Remove the comma
apply
price
is not much the community will continue to patronise them. For example
, in the public market buying of
beans is 500 naira and in the shop Change preposition
apply
its
600 Replace the word
it's
it is
naira
since Change to a plural noun
nairas
,
the difference is not high the Remove the comma
apply
neighborhood
will no longer Change the spelling
neighbourhood
thought
of not buying stuff in the supermarkets.
In conclusion, Change the verb form
think
be thought
due to
the controversy over packaging
of Correct article usage
the packaging
goods
in shops by manufacturer
making it expensive and restrictions of people not to purchase it. I will say that the Fix the agreement mistake
manufacturers
manufacturer
have
Change the verb form
has
alots
of Correct your spelling
lots
adjustment
to put in place to enable continuity of patronage by not adding much Fix the agreement mistake
adjustments
on
the materials. The Change preposition
to
neighborhood
Change the spelling
neighbourhood
do
not need to stop going to the shops to buy their commodity since it's just little differences.Change the verb form
does
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