The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2023. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below
The line graph describes the number of tourists that visits a museum located in the UK during two seasons in the year 2003.
the
Overall
, the museum attracted more Linking Words
visitors
in Use synonyms
Summer
thanCorrect article usage
the Summer
Change preposition
in
winter
period.
At first glance, the figures for Use synonyms
visitors
during Use synonyms
winter
started increasing gradually to about 550 persons Use synonyms
especially
Add the comma(s)
,especially
at
the early hours of the Change preposition
in
day
after which it Use synonyms
significant
dropped to 400 individuals. The form kept fluctuating till a sum of 600 people which was recorded close to Change the adjective
significantly
mid
Correct your spelling
midday
day
. Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
suggest
that more people visited the museum during the Change the verb form
suggests
day
in the Use synonyms
winter
than Use synonyms
any
other time. Change preposition
at any
After
Linking Words
this
peak, there was a decline among the Linking Words
visitors
which landed to less than 200 individuals and remained constant till the end of the year.
Meanwhile, the number of tourists attracted by the gallery during summer grew drastically from zero to 1300 at Use synonyms
first,
Linking Words
then
increased Linking Words
further
to almost 1500 persons Linking Words
especially
during the Add the comma(s)
,especially
mid
Add a hyphen
mid-day
day
.
Gradually, the digits dropped to 800 and Use synonyms
finally
to zero. Linking Words
This
implies that more Linking Words
visitors
were expected during the early hours and Use synonyms
mid
Add a hyphen
mid-day
day
of both seasons but Use synonyms
less
people visited in Change the quantifier
fewer
winter
Use synonyms
especially
during the evenings.Add the comma(s)
,especially
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, winter, day with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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