The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2023. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below

The line graph describes the number of tourists that visits a museum located in the UK during two seasons in the year 2003.

Overall

, the museum attracted more

visitors

in

Summer

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than

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in

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the

winter

period. At first glance, the figures for

visitors

during

winter

started increasing gradually to about 550 persons

especially

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at

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in

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the early hours of the

day

after which it

significant

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dropped to 400 individuals. The form kept fluctuating till a sum of 600 people which was recorded close to

mid

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midday

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day

.

This

suggest

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that more people visited the museum during the

day

in the

winter

than

any

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at any

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other time.

After

this

peak, there was a decline among the

visitors

which landed to less than 200 individuals and remained constant till the end of the year. Meanwhile, the number of tourists attracted by the gallery during summer grew drastically from zero to 1300 at

first,

then

increased

further

to almost 1500 persons

especially

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during the

mid

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mid-day

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day

. Gradually, the digits dropped to 800 and

finally

to zero.

This

implies that more

visitors

were expected during the early hours and

mid

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day

of both seasons but

less

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fewer

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people visited in

winter

especially

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during the evenings.