Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days public discussion has been going on over whether the

producers

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and the supermarkets have greater control to reduce the quantity of packaging of

goods

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while

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others believe it is the responsibility of the

consumers

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to stop buying

goods

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with a lot of packaging . From my own

perspective

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I believe the

producers

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,the supermarket have greater

responsibly

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than

consumers

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in the packaging of

goods

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. Packaging of

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involve

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many technical

process

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processes

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,

is

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not just about selling

goods

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to the

consumers

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.

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Also

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producers

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are responsible for manufacturing

quality

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materials for the

consumers

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,

while

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the supermarket is a means where the manufactured

goods

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are being sold to the

consumers

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.

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,

Manufacturer

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Manufacturers

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must be able to

package

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their

goods

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in order for

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them

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to

more

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be more

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enticing for the wholesaler who will

then

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distribute

it

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them

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so as to reach the

consumers

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Moreover

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packaging of

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is a form of advertisement ,it makes the

goods

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to be more attractive

for

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to

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the customer

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customer

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customers

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. Despite the fact that

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increase the demand

by

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of

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the

consumers

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but if the

goods

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are too expensive it can lead to low sales of

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product

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the product

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which can cause low profit for the manufacturer or the marketers .

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,

Packaging

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the Packaging

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of

goods

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increase

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increases

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the sales of the materials ,

it

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apply

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displays good

quality

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and it

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added more

values

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to the

product

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although

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it can be more expensive which can

leads

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lead

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to low sales of

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product

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the product

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.But

producers

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can make it more convenient and easy for the customers by reducing the packaging ,but the

product

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is still more genuine and have great

quality

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.

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,people who believe customers should avoid buying

goods

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with

alot

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a lot

of packaging are not totally wrong , considering the price of a

well

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package

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product

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and that of a low

package

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product

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the price are not always the same. Despite the fact that people love cheap things ,they still know that a

well

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good

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package

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product

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is different from a

low standard

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product

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. Most importantly when purchasing a

product

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the price of a

product

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is very important ,followed by the

quality

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of the

product

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and

also

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the presentation of the

product

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. Having considered all the arguments above ,I would conclude that

producers

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and supermarkets are more responsible to reduce the amount of packing of

goods

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than

consumers

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.