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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to increase the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that costumers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In
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 era, wrapping of
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 can be very controversial,
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, there are individuals who are of the opinion that it is the work of the producers and resellers to minimize the level at which they present their
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while
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 others think that consumers should stop purchasing
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 that have too many designs. In
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, people who think that buyers should stop purchasing
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 with too much design are of the opinion that packaging only makes
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 attractive but they cannot reveal the content.
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, just yesterday, a lady was lamenting on social media about how she bought a birthday present for a friend but was disappointed when she got home and
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 unwrapped the gift.
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 will enable us to understand why some individuals say that
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 with much packaging should not be bought.
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, other people think it is the duty of the producers and resellers to design their
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 because it helps in fast selling as it makes them captivating to buyers.
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, a survey in a company has shown that there is a surge in the rate at which consumers purchase
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 that are properly wrapped compared to the ones that are not. Again, it helps minimize the number of expired
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. The reason is that when these
goods
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 are beautifully presented, the demand rate tends to always increase, thereby selling them out would be so easy and they would not get spoilt. With
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. In conclusion, I believe that companies and merchants are in a good position to wrap their
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 in any presentable manner as it helps in the growth of a firm.
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