The line graph shows information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
Task 1
The linear graph depicts data on the number of tourists that visited an art gallery in the United Kingdom in 2003 during summer and winter.
Overall
, it is evident from the information provided that more visitors were at the tourist attraction at noon when the temperature was warmer than in the evening which recorded the lowest turnout.
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Initially
, about 200 people were at the museum at 900 hours in the morning but the number steadily increased to 1400 at 11:00 am and reached the peak at 12 noon with about 1500 holiday-makers before it started declining gradually to 1800 people at 1500 hours in the afternoon and Linking Words
subsequently
dropped to zero at 1700 of the day.
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In addition
, the museum received the majority of the tourists at midday which might be Linking Words
due to
fair weather allowing visitors to go outside for sightseeing and the lowest towards sunset probably because of the chilly weather. It can be seen from the information given that more people were present in the gallery when the climatic conditions were warmer than the colder weather.Linking Words
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