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The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the average daily temperatures in
Brisbane
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 and
Canberra
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. The bar chart demonstrates the average number of
days
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 per month with rainfall in the same two cities in Australia.
Overall
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, the daily temperatures in
Brisbane
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 and
Canberra
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 experienced a decrease from
February
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 to July.
Additionally
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, the number of
days
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 with rainfall in two Australian cities from May to November was much less than in the other months. As can be seen in the line graph, the average maximum and minimum temperatures in
Brisbane
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 were higher than those in
Canberra
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 in general.
While
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 the average daily maximum temperature in
Brisbane
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 occurred in
February
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, reaching 30 degrees CelsiusCelcius,
Canberra
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’s average maximum temperature was around 27 degrees Celcius, and lasted from December to
February
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. The lowest average daily minimum temperature in both cities occurred in July, dropping to around 10 degrees Celcius in
Brisbane
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 and 1 degree Celcius in
Canberra
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.
In contrast
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,
Brisbane
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 experiences the highest average amount of rainy
days
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 from December to April, with the highest totals of 14 rainy
days
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 per month in
February
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 and March.
On the other hand
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,
Canberra
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's wettest months, with an average of 10
days
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 of rainfall per month, are from June to August.
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