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The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for university lecturer describing the information shown below

The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for university lecturer describing the information shown below
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The chart below shows the actual figure of
people
 coming to
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the museum
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museum
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museums
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 in
harmattan
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Harmattan
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 and
rainy
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the rainy
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 season in the year 2003. It's in thousand
unit
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units
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 per individual. It's seen that
alot
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a lot
 of
people
 enter
museum
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museums
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 during the
summer
 period
that
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than
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winter
time
.Both the
summer
 and
winter
takes
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take
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 off at zero
time
 with no visitor entry
the
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to the
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museum
.
Eventually
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,Eventually
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 the
summer
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number of summer
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 visitor
increase
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increased
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1300
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by 1300
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 by 1100
time
 and decline
at
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by
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 1200 by 1500
people
 to 800
individual
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individuals
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 at 1400 and gradually decrease to no person at 1800. The
winter
 slightly
increase
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increases
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 to 500
person
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people
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 at 1000
time
 and has
a
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an
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 instability entry until it reaches 600 visitors
of
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out of
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 1200 and
then
 has
drastic
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a drastic
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 decrease to no visitors at 1400 and
maintain
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maintains
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 a static movement from 1500 to 1800. In conclusion, the
museum
 opens at the same
time
 in
winter
 and
summer
 and closes at
exact
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the exact
an exact
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time
 both
people
 visiting
at
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in
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summer
as
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a
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 higher number than
winter
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in winter
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 period
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, museum, summer, winter, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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