The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given chart illustrates the value of one country's export in

petroleum

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products

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, engineered

goods

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germs

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and

jewellery

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, agricultural

products

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, and

textiles

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in two different years meanwhile the table portrays each category of export in 2016 compared with 2015 in percentage change.

Overall

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, in 2016 the highest earning was for

petroleum

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products

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and the lowest was for

textiles

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. The percentages change in values (2015-2016) increased for

petroleum

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products

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, engineered

goods

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, agricultural

products

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, and

textiles

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increased.

To begin

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with,

petroleum

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products

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in 2015 at 60

billion

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lower than in 2016 at 63%. In 2015 engineered just got 58

billion

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and in 2016 increased to 62

billion

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Germs

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and

jewellery

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in 2015 were 42

billion

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and slightly decreased to 41% in 2016.

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, agriculture

products

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earned 31

billion

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in 2015 and slightly rose to 32

billion

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in 2016. The

last

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product that earned the lower value was

textiles

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, in 2015 the number was just 28

billion

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and in 2016 increased to 32

billion

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. The number fluctuated, in 2016

germs

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and

jewellery

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experienced decreased.

However

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, in 2016 the other categories

such

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petroleum

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products

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, engineered

goods

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, agricultural

products

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, and

textiles

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increased. The table depicts, agricultural

products

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increased at 0.81% followed by

petroleum

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products

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at 3%, the third rank was engineered

goods

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rose at 8.5% and the highest was

textiles

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increased at 15.24%. The one and only

decreased

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decrease

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in 2015-2016 was

germs

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and

jewellery

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at 5.18%.

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May 13, 2023

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Vocabulary: Replace the words petroleum, products, goods, germs, jewellery, textiles, billion with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 7 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
7
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

232 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

exports
categories
percentage change
value
machinery
textiles
agricultural products
raw materials
increase
decrease
trend
sector
growth
decline
economic factors
market demand
trade policies
contribution
anomalies
unexpected findings
implications
economy
trade negotiations
export strategies

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