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You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say: – Describe what you left and where it happened. – Why are these papers important? – What would you like the manager to do about it? Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I left several crucial
documents
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 in your
taxi
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while
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 I used it.
Firstly
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, I rent your
taxi
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 from your office around 10:00 AM yesterday. I used it to go to my office to submit my offer letter and original educational certificates. As soon as I reached there, I give a
taxi
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 to another customer without taking my
documents
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. When I reached
at
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the office I found that I did not have papers with me, and I felt so tense at that time. These papers are important to me because it includes my original education mark sheets and certificates. I need to show these
documents
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to
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 every stage of my life whether it is getting
job
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a job
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, making
passport
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a passport
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 or going abroad
for
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 study.
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, I really need
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this
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these
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documents
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 as soon as possible before it lost.
Lastly
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, I would like to request you to help me to find out these
documents
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 for me. It is good
to
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 me if you contact
that
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the
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 person
which
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whom
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 I gave
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taxi
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a taxi
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 to him, and ask him about my
documents
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. Please respond at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Milav Soni

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