Some people feel supermarkets and manufacturers have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether industries or consumers should be responsible for the reduction in
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of
products
displayed in stores.
This
essay will discuss both arguments and explain why I believe companies should make more efforts in boycotting excessive packaging. On the one hand, many producers manufacture commodities and put them in boxes as a means of attracting customers to buy their
products
.
However
, some of the materials that are used in making
such
packages are not eco-friendly and
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led to the depletion of the ozone layers in recent years.
For
this
reason, industries as a whole will benefit greatly from looking for environmentally friendly alternatives for their
products
.
Conversely
, buyers
also
play a role in saving the earth from harmful activities by stopping the purchase of items wrapped in
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amount of plastic covering.
This
will result in
the
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less demand for
such
item
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items
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and it will directly limit manufacturing, thereby causing a decline in sales.
For example
, in
Nigeria
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the massive reduction in the purchase of packaged meat from a particular meat vendor led
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the company to invent jut
bag
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bags
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for their meat sales.
Moreover
, customers can replace
nylon packed
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nylon-packed
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groceries with
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shopping bags that are not dangerous to the environment. In conclusion,
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individuals have a role to play in the reduction of packaged
consumable
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consumables
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. I believe companies and shops have more responsibility in ensuring that their
products
are not detrimental to the ecosystem.
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