The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table highlights information about the amount of rainfall on average monthly in two diverse conurbations.
Overall
, it can be seen that there is a fluctuation trend in Woodsville which means there are not a lot of differences during the amount of
fall
in a year period and
this
trend is not altered again in Blacksbore with the exception of its
inches
were nowhere near as high as Woodsville's
inches
. Looking at the details, as regards Woodsville, the percentages related to winter seasons are from 3.75 to 5
inches
and
then
in spring these amounts are approximately halved.
Following
this
, in summer these portions continue to
fall
but in
fall
, these amounts increase dramatically and hit a peak from 3 to 6
inches
. If we look at
Blacksbore
Correct your spelling
Blacksburg
, winter is on the top with the highest ratios.
Following
this
, the proportions drop gradually from 0.1 to 1 in spring but do not stop by continuing to decrease in summer.
Conversely
, after Six months these amounts grow from 0.5 to 2.5 in the
fall
.
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