In the past, everyone wore clothes according to their culture but now people wear similar clothes all around the world. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Textile
sector always has been important for expressing national or individual characteristics Correct article usage
The textile
towords
other individuals. Before Correct your spelling
towards
people
wear similar clothes
such
as sweatshirts or jeans everywhere, everyone wore cultural clothes
acording
to their national Correct your spelling
according
heritages
in the past. Fix the agreement mistake
heritage
This
development is relatively negative for the expression of national features.
The most important drawback is older wearings represent national features,
and living conditions for the society. Even Remove the comma
apply
Correct article usage
the colors
colors
of the items are selected Change the spelling
colours
due to
special meaning as their habitat's color
or might be related Change the spelling
colour
with
their Change preposition
to
flag's
. Change noun form
flags
For instance
, If they were living in a cold habitat, their choices for clothes
were mostly blue and white hues. On the other hand
, many national armies'
wore uniforms made Change noun form
armies
by
unique Change preposition
of
colors
of their flags. Change the spelling
colours
For example
, Turk armies' uniforms always carry white and red on their clothes
because these colors
represent their flags. Not only are they textiles, but Change the spelling
colours
also
identification of their national heritage.
Although
it is easy to access jeans or t-shirts
which are modern Correct your spelling
T-shirts
clothes
knowadays
, they are expensive Correct your spelling
nowadays
compare
to older Wrong verb form
compared
clothes
. Moreover
, people
have to buy lots of clothes
, because their quality are
worse than cultural Change the verb form
is
wearings
. It may Fix the agreement mistake
wearing
related
to the quality of old fabrics Change the verb form
be related
relate
were
much better than new synthetic fabrics. It is true that our grandparents only have a couple of Wrong verb form
being
clothes
and only a pair of shoes, but now people
have their own wearing rooms contain
a lot of items these days. It is negative for Wrong verb form
containing
people
who want to save money and escape from unnecessary expenses.
In conclusion, today people
wear similar clothes
all around the world, but they wore unique clothes
according to
their national heritages
in the past. These older Fix the agreement mistake
heritage
clothes
were cheaper than modern items,
and Remove the comma
apply
representetive
Correct your spelling
representative
representatives
for
their cultures. Transition to modern Change preposition
of
clothes
are
relatively negative development Change the verb form
is
due to
these features.Submitted by historicalpen on
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