You recently organized an all day meeting for your company , which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said they liked the hotel but they where unhappy about the food that was served for lunch Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.in your letter Say what the participants liked about the hotel Explain why they where unhappy about the food Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

Dear Sir, I am writing to appreciate your efforts in making sure our meeting which was held in your hotel was a success. Our invited guests all had a great experience with most facilities at the venue especially, with the sound system as they were so audible and they

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commended the effectiveness of the air conditioners as they made the place conducive for us to stay for as long as we wanted.

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, most of them had a few negative comments about the

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, the

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was not properly presented, it was so awkward and didn't look like

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made by a professional.

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, the taste was nothing to write home about. It was not well cooked and the ingredients feel as though they were not well combined. I

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suggest that you source for a well-seasoned chef that will take some charge to come and give your staff the appropriate training on

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preparation and presentation. I want to thank you once again for making our event a memorable one,I do hope you take my suggestions into consideration. Yours faithfully Elisha Chidinma