The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
The line graph illustrates the
air
pollution between 4 sections in The United Kingdom by measuring in million
tonnes
, such
as The
Correct article usage
apply
transport
, Industry, Total air
pollutants
and Households
. over the period of a century between the year
Fix the agreement mistake
years
of
1990 and 2005.
Regarding total Change preposition
apply
air
pollutants
and Industry
they have seen a steady drop in the source of Add a comma
Industry,
air
pollutants
in The UK since 1990 , while
the air
pollutants
of households
and transport
started at around 1 million
tonnes
in 1990. then
continue dropped down in 1993 at which point they reached down to under four million
tonnes
in total, the industry followed a similar dropping trend which dropped to 2 million
tonnes
by 2005.
In contrast
, Households
and transport
air
pollutants
all began the period at under 2 million
tonnes
in 1990,
and showed their fluctuations until 1999, the Remove the comma
apply
transport
climbed slightly to almost it
began in 2005, Correct pronoun usage
what it
while
the Households
was dropping
to nearly 0 Wrong verb form
dropped
million
tonnes
.
Overall
the air
pollution of all sections had shown an increase in sources since the start of the period with expectations for reliance on those fuel sources, with the exception of Transport
, which grew steadily or unchanged from when it started until 2005.Submitted by kanchanakularathna1991 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, million, tonnes, transport, pollutants, households with synonyms.
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