Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to increase the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that costumers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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some rising infectious

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. So a group of people claim that markets and production

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companies

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grocery

must increase their packaging,

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others believe that clients should avoid

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overpackaged goods. The following essay will aim at outlining both sides,

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my personal opinion.

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with, nowadays it is undeniable that there are rising

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plenty

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as Covid-19, and individuals

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arguing

that the packaging of goods should be increased.

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it is a huge damage

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the environment. To

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, packages for good are mostly made from paper, or some type of plastic, and we know that all papers come from trees, so that, deforestation is the main predominant reason

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global warming.

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, there will be

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simultaneously with packaging,

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pollution.

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increasing packaging may prevent some kind of minor disease, it will be huge harm

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nature.

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contrast

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those people, some individuals claim that folk should avoid

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overpackaging. Overpackaging doesn't mean that the spreading of

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infectious

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harm

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mankind from less packaging, and many other serious

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as from blood or air. So just increasing packaging will be just nonsense,but

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disaster for

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the environment

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. As an example all fast food cafes getting used to all thing

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packaged

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, and many of these packages are just waste, and they

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improve

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hygiene. So

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of increasing packaging, they should be decreased. In conclusion, both sides cited some

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, my personal position is that since we should take care of

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environment

, the packaging must be decreased.