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level of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the word what are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.

#level #youth #crime #cities #word
Number
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 of
crimes
 that are committed by adolescents
have
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 grown dramatically around the world. Young
people
 everywhere are suffering more than ever before which can cause them to There are
number
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a number
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 of solutions which should be implemented to deal with youth crime.
While
level
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 of youth crime is rising, different
type
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types
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 of mental disorders are
also
 becoming more and more common, especially among young
people
. At the same time treating these
ilnesses
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illnesses
 and getting help is getting harder due
the
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 shortage of qualified nurses and doctors around the world. When
people
 are struggling mentally but not getting treated, they tend to implement problematic
behavior
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 which can lead them to do
things
 like committing
crimes
.
On the other
hand
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 young
people
 are living under increasing
amount
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 of pressure. They see
things
 that other teenagers have on social media all the time. If they are not able to afford those
things
 it might seem tempting to get them by any means. There are several ways to prevent young
people
 from committing
crimes
.
Firstly
, there should be more resources to support adolescents and offer them help when it is needed. Having at least one trustful adult in their life can make a difference when it comes to preventing youth crime. In every
city
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 there should
also
 be enough interesting
things
 to do for young
peolpe
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people
 which would keep them occupied. When they are busy doing
things
 they enjoy they would not have time to commit
crimes
. In conclusion, I believe that the increasing number of mental health problems and the pressure that young
people
 are facing nowadays are
main
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 reasons why they commit more
crimes
 than before.
However
, offering help and organising activities for adolescents can help
preventing
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 these issues.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • youth crime
  • increasing rapidly
  • socioeconomic factors
  • breakdown of family structure
  • influence of peer pressure
  • lack of education
  • lack of employment opportunities
  • substance abuse
  • inadequate law enforcement
  • media and technology
  • poverty
  • inequality
  • gang culture
  • juveniles
  • criminal behavior
  • delinquency
  • criminal activities
  • antisocial behavior
  • youth offenders
  • recidivism
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