The table shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009.
The given table illustrates the percentage of
school
children attending 4 different types of secondary school
from 2000 to 2009.
Overall
, it is clear that
the specialist, grammar and voluntary-controlled schools
experienced a downward trend in the number of pupils, in comparison the community schools
experienced an upward trend in secondary school
education during the same period.
At the beginning of the period, voluntary-controlled schools
became the most significant providers of secondary schools
, while
specialist schools
became the lowest provider, and they declined by the same percentage. In 2005, grammar and voluntary-controlled schools
continued to decline, grammar schools
decreased to 19% from 52%, respectively. At the end
of the period, three types of schools
diminished to 10%, 12% and 20%.
However
, in 2000 years, although
community school
is the lowest provider of secondary school
, during years increased by a considerable rate. And in 2005 it achieved 32 per cent from 12 per cent. And at the end
of, it can rise gradually to 58%.Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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