The table shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009.
The given table illustrates the percentage of
school
children attending 4 different types of secondary Use synonyms
school
from 2000 to 2009.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the specialist, grammar and voluntary-controlled Linking Words
schools
experienced a downward trend in the number of pupils, in comparison the community Use synonyms
schools
experienced an upward trend in secondary Use synonyms
school
education during the same period.
At the beginning of the period, voluntary-controlled Use synonyms
schools
became the most significant providers of secondary Use synonyms
schools
, Use synonyms
while
specialist Linking Words
schools
became the lowest provider, and they declined by the same percentage. In 2005, grammar and voluntary-controlled Use synonyms
schools
continued to decline, grammar Use synonyms
schools
decreased to 19% from 52%, respectively. Use synonyms
At the end
of the period, three types of Linking Words
schools
diminished to 10%, 12% and 20%.
Use synonyms
However
, in 2000 years, Linking Words
although
community Linking Words
school
is the lowest provider of secondary Use synonyms
school
, during years increased by a considerable rate. And in 2005 it achieved 32 per cent from 12 per cent. And Use synonyms
at the end
of, it can rise gradually to 58%.Linking Words
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