A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts say how you think the company should spend the money Write at least 150 words.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Madhur Bathla, I am writing
this
letter with reference to the feedback that your company is asking from the public to decide between spending money on local children's sports team or paying for two open-air concerts.
If the company selects to invest money in the team of athletes, in such
case, the brand value for the organisation would be marketed among the fans through word-of-mouth who are visiting the stadium to watch the sports events being conducted at the stadium venue.
The music concerts would attract a plethora of crowds. Moreover
, the auditorium is generally full and people from other towns also
visit these concerts. In addition
, the anchor as well as
artists will also
promote the brand name while
delivering performances.
I would suggest the company provide sponsorship to the sports teams of teenagers because that will promote a culture of athleticism among the young generation followed by getting the brand's products promoted with the help of such
events.
Hope you would appreciate my feedback.
Warm Regards,
Madhur BathlaSubmitted by madhur.bathla on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite