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Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What are the major causes of environmental damage? Who are responsible for preventing environmental damage?

#damage #countries
There is a number of
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however
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 serious issue
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is
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 global warming which increase significantly nowadays in many nations
due to
 rising Personal transportation and a clear huge area of forest for personal use .
Nevertheless
 ,it can be tackled with the support of the government .In
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 I will explain the reason
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 environmental damage and some steps to control it efficiently as well. To commence with the main reason is that these days everyone gives more preference to their Personal vehicle rather than public transport systems which give birth to harmful gasses and traffic jams.Needless to say , to reduce traffic
problems
 , the government constructed double roads .
As a result
, they clear forest areas .Adding more , in
this
 current time,
people
 move from countryside area to urban city
due to
 various facilities and
people
 make their home over there to save their travelling time .
Hence
 ,they clear huge forest areas, to build their houses .
Therefore
 these are
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some things which directly harm the environment There is some prevention which government should take to solve the
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 issues .First and foremost ,authorities have to arrange an awareness camp in which , they can guide the
people
 to grow a number of trees and plants in their area to save the environment .
Moreover
 , lawmakers have to provide various services in the village like education,healthcare and many others,so that
people
 cannot feel the need
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to move from
 their birthplace and live over there happily.
Apart from
this
 ,
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the government
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 to encourage
people
 to use public transport
instead
 of Personal vehicles to reduce traffic and pollution
problems
 efficiently.
To conclude
 , there is no doubt that environmental
problems
 increase day by day because of
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 use of personal vehicles ,
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 it can be handled by providing awareness to Individuals related to
this
 problem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrialization
  • habitat destruction
  • urbanization
  • overpopulation
  • overexploitation
  • deforestation
  • biodiversity
  • waste management
  • fossil fuels
  • air pollution
  • climate change
  • renewable energy
  • sustainable agriculture
  • recycling systems
  • international cooperation
  • conservation
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