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A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to share my thoughts on the
book
 that influenced me for an article in your magazine called ‘The
book
 that influenced me most’. Recently, I read a
book
 named ‘I came upon a
lighthouse
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’ which is based on
writer’s
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the writer’s
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 experiences with his employer
Mr.
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Mr
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 Ratan Tata. I became aware
about
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of
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 his calm, charming personality, and the aura he brings with him.
Moreover
,
this
book
 teaches us about how someone can be so humble and down to earth even after reaching all the milestones of success.
Additionally
,
this
book
 covers how we can help and understand animals who
brings
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bring
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 us a lot of happiness.
Also
, it emphasizes
on
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the point that you do not need to be rich in order to give it back to society. I think
this
book
 is all about positivity and it would influence people to do their contribution to
the
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society. For
further
 details, please reach out to me on my mobile phone 1029384756. I would be extremely happy if more people learn about
Mr.
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Mr
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 Ratan and the work he has done for the betterment of society. Yours faithfully, Sachin Sharma
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