You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. – I am on vacation • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.- investigate the case/send revised credit card statement

Dear Sir/ I'm Naif a member
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the bank for 6 years, I hope
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message finds you well. I am writing to inform you about
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exigent circumstance that
happend
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happened
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to my credit card.
Last
night I received a message from the bank
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lists
a
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number of expensive purchases
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, I can assure you that I did not make it.
Firstly
, I am outside the country on vacation with my family so there is no
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to make any purchases.
Secondly
,
this
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items are some electrical equipment and I'm a tutor so
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not belong to me. I hope
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you and your teammates
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find
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what
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happened
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to my credit card and perhaps that will bring my
mony
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money
back. I know it's
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issue but I need an urgent solution as I need my credit card back. Thank you for your time. I hope I
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my situation effectively. I am eagerly
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for your
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response
. Your Faithfully, Naif Nazzawi.
Submitted by naif.waleead on

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Single Idea per Paragraph
Consider breaking single long paragraphs into multiple smaller ones to improve readability. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea.
Logical Structure
You can enhance clarity by ensuring each point flows logically to the next. A bit more structure could improve clarity.
Complete Response
You might want to consider checking for minor grammatical issues to polish your writing.
Complete Response
The letter includes all necessary components such as introduction, explanation, and request for action.
Greeting and Closing
The opening and closing of the letter are appropriate and professional.
Suitable Writing Tone
The tone of the letter is polite and suitable for communication with a bank manager.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Credit card statement
  • Unauthorized transactions
  • Discrepancies
  • Bank manager
  • Investigate
  • Issue
  • Fraudulent activity
  • Account number/Customer ID
  • Revised statement
  • Rectify the mistake
  • Investigation
  • Resolution
  • Dispute charges
  • Verification
  • Security measures
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