The charts show the main methods of transport of people travelling to one university in 2004 and 2009.
The pie charts illustrate the percentages of different types of transport
of
people travelling to one university in the years 2004 and 2009.
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for
Overall
, Linking Words
car
and Fix the agreement mistake
cars
bus
had the highest figures in both years, but Fix the agreement mistake
buses
train
had the lowest one. Fix the agreement mistake
trains
In addition
, the figure for Linking Words
bus
had Add an article
the bus
a
significant growth, Remove the article
apply
while
the opposite was true for that of Linking Words
car
in 2009.
Car accounted for the highest percentage of 51% in 2004, falling dramatically Add an article
the car
a car
of
23% in 2009. An opposite pattern was seen in the figure for Change preposition
to
bus
, going up remarkably from 33% in 2004 to 46% in 2009
Meanwhile, the percentage of Fix the agreement mistake
buses
bicycle
stood at 9% in 2004 and Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
then
had a considerable climb of 7% in 2009, Linking Words
whereas
Linking Words
train
had the lowest figures, with 3% in 2004 and 4% in 2009. The proportion of people walking witnessed a slight increase from 4% in 2004 to 6% in 2009.Fix the agreement mistake
trains
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