The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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following

illustration depicts the

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of the

population

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that are older than 65 in

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diffrent

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different

countries

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between 1940 and 2040. Those

three

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countries

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are

Japan

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, Sweden and the

USA

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.

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number of older

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will increase till 2040. There are

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big

diffrences

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differences

difference

between the percentages from 1940 till 2040 in all

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countries

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.

Japan

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will have the highest rate of life expectancy. And the least

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of life expectancy will have the

USA

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. The

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of

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that are aged 65 and more made up just 5% of the

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in

Japan

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, and

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number has decreased till 1960 (with roughly 3%).

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percentage

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remained constant till approximately 1980.

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from

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year the amount of boomer have increased gradually until about 2030.

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there will be a

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dramatic

rise. And the amount of older

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in

Japan

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will rise from 5% to almost 30%. In

Sweden

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older

people

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made up about 7% of the

population

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. And

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percentage

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have been fluctuating till about 2020. After there will be a steep rise. And older

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will make up almost a quarter of the Swedish nation. In the

USA

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the

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of older

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in 2040 was the highest among these

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countries

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because it made up almost 10% of the

population

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.

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number has been fluctuating till 1980 (with 15% of the

population

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), and it

reamined

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remained

steady till almost 2020. From

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year the

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of older

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increased

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and made up 25% of the

population

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of the

USA

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.