Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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days

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, a group of people claim that the government should prohibit the

practice

of dangerous

sports

while

others defend that people are free to take part in

sports

and activities that make them happy. From my

perspective

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I would argue that people should be free to

practice

such

sports

as they wish. On the one hand, there is a range of reasons why risky

sports

should be prohibited from being taken by the populace. First and foremost, is common knowledge that

sports

activities accidentally cause serious injuries

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the athletes, the person can break some bones, or something can happen and affect their physical health, and probably will be incapacitated for a long period.

Furthermore

, some dangerous

sports

,

such

as boxing,

mix

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martial art, or even American football, mostly represent violence.

Hence

,

this

sport

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audience particularly teenagers, would probably be encouraged to reproduce what they saw. On another hand, proponents of

this

practice

just have as

argument

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the right to be free to make choices and these include

sports

,

however

, they are not analyzing the risks.

For example

, in Portugal, for a long

period

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they had as entertainment activity bulls

runs

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, and the population enjoyed watching,

as a

result

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the had many deaths during the exhibition, so, extreme

sports

sometimes can be fatal, so, the government

instead

of banning, they should regulate. They must force the companies who

provides

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dangerous

sports

to be more

strictly

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about the procedures and the

protect

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equipment’s

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. In conclusion, I think that citizens are at liberate to play dangerous

sports

and activities, but they must be regulated and

be

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practice

with

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a lot

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precaution