The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The

two

maps show changes to the Liverton docks from 1980 to today. We can see that the Liverton docks made many changes during

this

period, including new

building

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buildings

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brigde

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bridge

and converted

building

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buildings

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. In 1980, it had four ships in the river,

two

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and two

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cranes, one was opposite the warehouse in the north and the

last

one was between

two

warehouse

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warehouses

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. The

last

warehouse was located in the sound next to the crane to the coast. Today the Liverton docks had many changes, four ships in the river

was

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were

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knocked down and replaced with a ship museum, there was a new

brigde

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bridge

bride

and floor barrier were built. New buildings were built in the north,

two

warehouses were replaced with

education

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an education

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centre and kid's playing area, a crane

which

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apply

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was demonstrated and

sailing

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a sailing

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club was built for a change. The south was expanded there were three new buildings

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and a

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hotel. parking and apartments between them, it had a river walk in front of them.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words two with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

162 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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