IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 5.5

The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The
two
Use synonyms
 maps show changes to the Liverton docks from 1980 to today. We can see that the Liverton docks made many changes during
this
Linking Words
 period, including new
building
Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
show examples
,
brigde
Correct your spelling
bridge
 and converted
building
Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
show examples
. In 1980, it had four ships in the river,
Use synonyms
two
Correct word choice
and two
show examples
 cranes, one was opposite the warehouse in the north and the
last
Linking Words
 one was between
two
Use synonyms
warehouse
Change to a plural noun
warehouses
show examples
. The
last
Linking Words
 warehouse was located in the sound next to the crane to the coast. Today the Liverton docks had many changes, four ships in the river
was
Change the verb form
were
show examples
 knocked down and replaced with a ship museum, there was a new
brigde
Correct your spelling
bridge
bride
 and floor barrier were built. New buildings were built in the north,
two
Use synonyms
 warehouses were replaced with
education
Add an article
an education
show examples
 centre and kid's playing area, a crane
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
was demonstrated and
sailing
Correct article usage
a sailing
show examples
 club was built for a change. The south was expanded there were three new buildings
a
Correct word choice
and a
show examples
hotel. parking and apartments between them, it had a river walk in front of them.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
▼
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words two with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: