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The pie charts represent 6 different regions that utilized water for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes.

The pie charts represent 6 different regions that utilized water for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes.
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The pie graphs provide the percentages illustrating the primary purposes for
water
 utilisation in six different geographical areas.
Overall
, what stands out from the charts is that
although
 the statistics for Europe and North America
consists
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 of industrial aim at the largest distribution, those of the other regions, namely, South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia, nominated
agricultual
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agricultural
 purpose as their most popular hydro usage.
To begin
with
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 the information regarding the major four areas,
while
 agriculture dominated the
four fifths
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 of the total
water
 utilisation proportion in Africa and Asian regions, only roughly 10%
water
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of water
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 is used for
eigher
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either
higher
 industry or domestic use from their
resevour
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reservoir
.
However
,
although
 agriculture constitutes
of
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apply
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the South American percentage as the largest component, the figure is not as much as the proceeding places.
On the other hand
,
whereas
 over
a
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half of
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the Europian
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Europian
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European
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 proportion
are
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is
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 accounted
by
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for by
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industrical
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industrial
 use, that of North America is 5%
fewer
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less
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 than
this
.
Instead
,
thr
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the
 former region spared 32% of their
water
 stock for agriculture, which is 8% less
of
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than
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 the counterpart of the latter.
However
, their rates for domestic use are roughly identical at 13% and 15% respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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