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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
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This
 graph presents the
air
pollutants
 in
UK
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the UK
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 from 1990 to 2005 . A cause for
air
pollutant
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pollutants
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 is Household , Industry and transportation , The trend of
air
pollutants
is
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has been
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 decreasing in
decade
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a decade
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Overall
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The overall
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source of
air
pollutants
 in
UK
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the UK
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from
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is from
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 Industry , Industrial
pollutants
 are more than 50 % of all
air
pollutants
 .
At
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In
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 1990 is the peak of total
air
pollutants
 .the atmosphere in
UK
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the UK
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 is often contaminated by hazardous particles around 7 million tonnes
At
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In
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 1993 industrial
pollutants
had
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apply
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suddenly
drop
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dropped
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 and
reach
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reached
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 the nadir
during
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from
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 1996 to 2005 .
Otherwise
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 transportation
generate
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generates
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air
pollutants
 is equalize
form
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from
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 1990 to 2005. it
shown
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shows
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UK
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the UK
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 has
a
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had a
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good strategy to reduce
air
pollutants
 since 1990. For Household
air
pollutants
 is stable until
return
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returned
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 to near zero 0% in 2005 .
it
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It
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shown
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shows
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 people in
UK
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the UK
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 has
concern
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a concern
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 about In
conclusion
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conclusion,
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Air
pollutants
 in
UK
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the UK
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decrease
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have decreased
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 nearly 50% from 7 million
tonness
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tonnes
 3.5 million
tonness
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tonnes
since
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from
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 1990 to 2005 .
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