You recently booked a part time course at a college, You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to your college administrator. In your letter Say which part time course you’ve booked. explain why you need to cancel your booking ask about booking a different course. Begin as : Dear Sir or Madam

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Dear Sir, I am Keisha Thomas and am writing

this

letter in regard to the cancellation of my part-time course for the upcoming semester. I have chosen the course "Statistics and Mathematical Operations". The ID of the subject is W1199N. Unfortunately, I have decided to cancel my booking for the next semester and postpone it

further

. The subject of Statistics requires a lot of preparation and many assignments to complete and submit.

However

, we are

also

supposed to complete a mandatory internship in the next semester for which we have twenty credits and I feel it would not be an ideal approach to select a tough subject and

then

manage both work and studies.

Instead

, I would like to book another program "Human-Computer Interaction" with id E997DX, which will be very helpful for my internship and can make me understand the concepts quite quickly and easily.

This

way I can complete my pending electives and

also

get the required work experience. I would ask you to please look into the request and let me know if there are any

further

documents required for processing. You can reach out to me at [email protected]. Yours Sincerely, Keisha Thomas.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

196 words

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