The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles
The flow diagram illustrates how plastic
bottles
are recycled.
Looking from an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that Linking Words
this
process can be grouped into four main distinct stages: collecting used Linking Words
bottles
from recycling Use synonyms
bin
, sorting and compressing items, crushing and producing plastic pellets, and finishing the process by heating and forming them.
Fix the agreement mistake
bins
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At
the first stage Change preposition
In
in
recycling, used Change preposition
of
bottles
are collected from Use synonyms
recycling
bin by special vehicles to transfer to the recycling Correct article usage
the recycling
center
, where the Change the spelling
centre
bottles
are sorted by hand. Use synonyms
Next,
used Linking Words
bottles
are compressed into blocks in order to be crushed. Use synonyms
Then
, the crushed Linking Words
bottles
are washed with water to produce new materials.
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At
the fifth stage, plastic pellets are manufactured Change preposition
In
from
washing crushed Change preposition
by
bottles
. Use synonyms
Following
Linking Words
this
, these pellets are Linking Words
then
heated in order to create a new material that can be used in the manufacture of products ranging from clothes and Linking Words
bottles
to containers and pencils. These items are themselves recyclable and the process begins again.Use synonyms
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