The maps below show the village of stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.

The images display the two maps of the developments that were made in the village of Stokeford between 1930 and 2010.

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, it is apparent that many variations had occurred

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as the construction of new homes , the disappearance of farmland and the reduction of gardens in Stokeford,

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some remain things remain unchanged.

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with, in the north-west side , in 1930, there were some shops and homes established,

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in 2010, the shops were completely replaced with the construction of new residential buildings and the post office present there experienced no change. Moving towards the remaining information,in the former layout , there were big gardens in the southeast direction, whilst they were fully destroyed in the latter .

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, the large houses in the same direction were converted into retirement houses in 2010.

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, the primary school on the northeast side in 1930, was expanded with two more buildings in 2010.

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Single idea per paragraph

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Topic Vocabulary:

demolition
residential areas
infrastructure
urbanization
land use
farmlands
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layout
developments
economic growth
population growth
amenities
transformation
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