The maps below show the village of stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.
The images display the two maps of the developments that were made in the village of Stokeford between 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, it is apparent that many variations had occurred such
as the construction of new homes , the disappearance of farmland and the reduction of gardens in Stokeford, whereas
some remain things remain unchanged.
To begin
with, in the north-west side , in 1930, there were some shops and homes established, while
in 2010, the shops were completely replaced with the construction of new residential buildings and the post office present there experienced no change.
Moving towards the remaining information,in the former layout , there were big gardens in the southeast direction, whilst they were fully destroyed in the latter .Additionally
, the large houses in the same direction were converted into retirement houses in 2010.Finally
, the primary school on the northeast side in 1930, was expanded with two more buildings in 2010.Submitted by lakhanaberdar on
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