Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

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All around the world, many
employees
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become remote workers and more children start to study from home because
technology
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has become more accessible and cheaper. Especially after
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pandemics
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this
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trend becomes much stronger than ever. Personally, I appreciate
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development as an excellent computer user.
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, now, can arrange their working time
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their personal
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, and
also
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for rural
areas
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this
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development is a chance to improve their
economy
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. As
technology
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is cheaper and
accessible
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more accessible
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these days,
people
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can apply
more
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for more
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suitable jobs
for
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to
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their personal
preferences
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, and work for these
companies
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. Lots of technological
companies
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are
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set their
centers
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near finance
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which are placed in crowded
areas
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. Some
people
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may not prefer working in crowded cities that restrict both their time and flexibility. These
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groups
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of
people
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can access jobs in the
technology
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market with the distance working opportunity in rural
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. Not only can it affects beneficially
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individuals, but
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rural
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'
economy
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in
a
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the
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long-term
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long term
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.
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, many Indians are currently working for
techonology
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technology
companies
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which are placed in
the
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Valley, but they are working from India as remote software programmers or engineers.
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, they can contribute
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country with the foreign currency flow to India which can improve their
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over time.
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remote working can give an alternative for
people
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who want to arrange their working hours for their plans and personal
preferences
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.
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old fashion working
schedule
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between 9:00-17:00 provides optimal conditions for
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, It can not efficient for
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'
preferences
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. It is true that many
employees
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only adapt their tasks at night and other colleagues prefer working in the morning. Remote working provide alternative working hours for
employees
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and their
preferences
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.
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, when the
technology
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pioneer, Google, had started to give an opportunity to distance working for
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, working efficiency improved significantly. I believe
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working model is beneficial for both tech
companies
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, and their
employees
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for these merits. In conclusion, many adults are working remotely, and more children are begining to study from home as
technology
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has become much cheaper and more accessible. From my point of view,
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development great
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employees
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preferences
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, and
economy
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of the rural
areas
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remote work
  • telecommuting
  • work-life balance
  • environmental impact
  • socio-economic background
  • face-to-face interaction
  • interpersonal skills
  • productivity
  • reliable technology
  • quality of education
  • flexible schedule
  • cost savings
  • commuting
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