Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

All around the world, many

employees

become remote workers and more children start to study from home because

technology

has become more accessible and cheaper. Especially after

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pandemics

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this

trend becomes much stronger than ever. Personally, I appreciate

this

development as an excellent computer user.

Employees

, now, can arrange their working time

according to

their personal

preferences

, and

also

for rural

areas

this

development is a chance to improve their

economy

. As

technology

is cheaper and

accessible

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more accessible

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these days,

people

can apply

more

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for more

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suitable jobs

for

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to

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their personal

preferences

, and work for these

companies

. Lots of technological

companies

are

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set their

centers

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centres

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near finance

centers

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centres

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which are placed in crowded

areas

. Some

people

may not prefer working in crowded cities that restrict both their time and flexibility. These

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groups

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of

people

can access jobs in the

technology

market with the distance working opportunity in rural

areas

. Not only can it affects beneficially

to

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individuals, but

also

to

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rural

areas

'

economy

in

a

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the

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long-term

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long term

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.

For instance

, many Indians are currently working for

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technology

companies

which are placed in

the

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Sillicon

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Silicon

Valley, but they are working from India as remote software programmers or engineers.

Therefore

, they can contribute

their

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to their

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country with the foreign currency flow to India which can improve their

economy

over time.

On the other

hand

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remote working can give an alternative for

people

who want to arrange their working hours for their plans and personal

preferences

.

Although

old fashion working

schedule

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schedules

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between 9:00-17:00 provides optimal conditions for

employees

, It can not efficient for

employees

'

preferences

. It is true that many

employees

only adapt their tasks at night and other colleagues prefer working in the morning. Remote working provide alternative working hours for

employees

and their

preferences

.

For instance

, when the

technology

pioneer, Google, had started to give an opportunity to distance working for

employees

, working efficiency improved significantly. I believe

this

working model is beneficial for both tech

companies

, and their

employees

for these merits. In conclusion, many adults are working remotely, and more children are begining to study from home as

technology

has become much cheaper and more accessible. From my point of view,

this

development great

according to

employees

preferences

, and

economy

of the rural

areas

.