You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from, In your email give details of the purchase describe the problem explain why you need a replacement urgently

Dear Sir/Madam, I am Keisha Thomas and am writing

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letter in regard to the purchase made from your website on 10th May but I am extremely disappointed with the product I have received. I have ordered an A-line white dress in size medium from Zara and H&M Sandals in size UK 6. The order id is OR12348. I was

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elated about the quick delivery but was appalled to see the items in the box. The items which I have received do not match the ones shown on the website ,

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I got a blue colour dress

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of a white one and

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I received block heels which are broken. I am a regular at your shop and usually recommend it to everyone, but looking at the current situation, I might have to re-think it. I request you to provide a replacement for the purchase which I have placed as there's a very special occasion for me in the upcoming week. Please do look into the issue as soon as possible. I hope to hear from you soon and receive my replacement quickly. Yours Sincerely, Keisha Thomas

Vaishnavi Dasari

May 15, 2023

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