Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Every nation needs a human culture which builds and contributes to
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their country. Many
people
say that these social issues bring up
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.
besides
, some
people
argue that offenders are of worse human
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. In my view,
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crime is a result of community rather than bad human nature.
While
some
people
consider the reason for the criminal is an issue
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society. These days, there are a lot of problems affecting the physical and mental health of humans.
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is one of the most
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lead to bad behaviour,
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, today young
people
tend to intentionally break the law, especially traffic laws like speeding and aggressive driving ( phóng nhanh vượt ẩu), and they are not wearing
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.
Additionally
, these
people
are reduced to poverty, they won’t know how to make a living. So, they can lose
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mind and act without thinking about the laws.
This
can hurt other
people
by threatening, blackmailing, robbing,
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killing
people
.
On the other hand
, others believe that a criminal is the result of a natural person. Today, there are a lot of children who act without thinking.
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, in an educational environment, where there are
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problems, bullying among students often occurs.
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characteristic
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of
people
, if these
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child have not education, they will
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be
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offender in the future.
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, bad characteristics
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laziness and selfishness could
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build up breed offenders. In conclusion, citizens say that
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crimes are the result of a person 's nature. But I hold the belief that social issues and property are the primary motives behind crime.
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