Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?
Nowadays, the scarcity of
water
is becoming a crucial issue in
Change preposition
apply
the
worldwide. Correct article usage
apply
This
situation was affected by many activities
of human
to keep survive it will contribute to Fix the agreement mistake
humans
create
new problems in human daily Change the verb form
creating
activities
. Human
should solve directly Fix the agreement mistake
Humans
this
problem by
individual action and Change preposition
through
government
policy.
To begin
with, water
is the
important role in human daily Correct article usage
an
activities
, but, in
Change preposition
apply
naturally
Change the word
natural
humans
Change the noun form
human
activities
to keep their need
will contribute to Fix the agreement mistake
needs
make
a new problem, Change the verb form
making
particulary
Correct your spelling
particularly
to make
Change the verb form
making
water
scarsity
. We believe it will difficult for domestic person or industrial users to cut down on the Correct your spelling
scarcity
water
they use. For example
, people who has
Change the verb form
have
profession
to be a farmer that to Correct article usage
the profession
captivating
their paddy with Wrong verb form
captivate
good
quality they need Add an article
the good
enourmus
fresh Correct your spelling
enormous
water
. However
, it will threat
the Replace the word
threaten
avaiblity
of fresh Correct your spelling
availability
water
for another humans
households such
as fresh water
for drinking and bathing.
Following
this
, people should aware
Add a missing verb
be aware
about
the domino effect of Change preposition
of
this
phenomenon with both the action as a citizen and also
the policy of government
. Add an article
the government
Personaly
, I believe that the as Correct your spelling
Personally
a
individual people must use Change the article
an
water
wisely and to
put off using Fix the infinitive
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
water
extravaganthly
. Correct your spelling
extravagantly
In addition
, the policy and innovation from government
Add an article
the government
is
urgent too. Change the verb form
are
Government
should create a regulation that regulate
the Change the verb form
regulates
using
of Replace the word
use
water
in their country and the innovation of government
such
as; reforestation, making a dam, and perhaps create
new technology Wrong verb form
creating
what
can change the dirty Correct word choice
that
water
into water
with good quality is great
way.
In conclusion, the lack of fresh Change the article
a great
water
can’t avoid in humans
life, but Change the noun form
human
humans
whom
Correct pronoun usage
who
well-known
as homo sapiens should consider their behaviour to use Add a missing verb
are well-known
water
sensibly and also
should make innovation
and Fix the agreement mistake
innovations
rule
to solve Fix the agreement mistake
rules
these problem
.Change the determiner
this problem
these problems
Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- One of the first problems of the...
- Another problem that needs to be considered...
- A possible solution to this problem would be...
- One immediate practical solution is to...