Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting the usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

These days, there are plenty of

alternative

medicines

and

treatments

which are believed

as

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a

solution

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to many

health

problems

instead

of seeing a

doctor

. The vast majority of

people

think that they are able to recover the

health

problems

using

alternative

medicines

such

as Omega3 or Vitamin supplements.

However

, I believe that the best solution to cure the

health

problem is the

medicines

and

treatments

from the usual

doctor

who is a professional in medication.

Alternative

medicines

and

treatments

have improved gradually through the research and experiments from medical

company

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companies

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which is quite trustworthy.

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,in fact,

many

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research

show

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the positive effects

on

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using Omega 3 supplements to prevent

the

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heart attack.

Furthermore

, Herb therapies are able to treat

the

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insomnia and migraine by reducing

the

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stress and relaxing the

mental

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mind

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.

However

,

although

the

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alternative

medicines

have great effects on curing

health

problems

, it is significant to visit the hospital and meet a

doctor

. Since the lack of knowledge in medication,

people

might overuse

the

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alternative

medicines

which can

be result

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in

an

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unexpected damage

of

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the other parts

in

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a

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body.

For instance

, elderly

people

might overuse

health

supplements because they can not understand the side effects which

are hide

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in the backside of the products with a small letter.

Therefore

, it is better to see the usual

doctor

who knows the personal condition of the body and

able

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to make a suitable decision for the

health

problem.

To conclude

, I think that

although

the development of

alternative

medicines

and

treatments

might be viewed as a positive solution for

people

, if the symptoms or knowledge about the

problems

are uncertain, the best method of recovering

the

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disease is visiting the usual

doctor

.