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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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The packaging industry has witnessed a boom in their businesses in the recent time. A few people are of the view that it’s the core responsibility of large selling stores to lessen the quantity of covering of products,
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, others suggest getting away from
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 products that have excessive packaging. In
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 the former point of view owing to the multiple reasons cited and discussed
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. To start with, a number of attributes are considered in order to ensure the safety of goods. Since it is the primary attention of the manufacturer to make sure the product, when reached a customer, is safe and up to the desired quality. Any exterior damage is deemed to impair the image of the product.
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, it rests assured the customer that the package is neither stolen nor smuggled, as any damage to the bottle or jar may alarm the end user.
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, on many packaging, it is written quite clearly that don't accept, if the seal of the package is broken or torn.
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, how it is possible to advise the customer to refrain from their
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 brand product just because of packaging? Of course, it is the duty of large firms to satisfy the end users not only in terms of quality, and features but
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 in the case of packaging.
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, the magnitude of the outer safety cover can be reduced to please the customers by applying the latest technology that not only complies with the safety standard but
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 assists in handling and transportation.
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, it is the basic right of the customers to have goods and brands of their own choice.
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, it is the utmost attention of the manufacturer to facilitate the end user in terms of quality, features, and
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 but not least exterior covering as well.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Eco-friendly
  • Carbon footprint
  • Excessive packaging
  • Biodegradable materials
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Consumer advocacy
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Waste reduction
  • Recycling initiatives
  • Green practices
  • Minimalist lifestyle
  • Resource conservation
  • Sustainable consumption
  • Packaging alternatives
  • Regulatory measures
  • Ethical choices
  • Environmental impact assessment
  • Renewable resources
  • Compostable packaging
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