You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The data displays the summary of students enrolled in various types of
schools
in three different years
. This
writing is analyzed based on the percentages of total pupils attending four different schools
in 2000, 2005, and 2009.
In the overview, the table shows a distinct number for each year with visible favouritism in voluntary-controlled schools
in the earliest years
before it was taken over by community
schools
by the end. Meanwhile, both specialist and grammar education institutions have always been less favoured over the years
.
To start with, among all four secondary centres, specialist schools
had been recorded at an average of 11% in almost a decade, which makes them the lowest in percentage overall
. While
grammar schools
experienced a decline to half of their original figure (24% to 12%) in just 9 years
, voluntary-controlled and community
school trends were reversed along the way. Voluntary-controlled education facilities started at their peak at slightly above 50% in 2000 but dropped by two-fifth of their original numbers by 2009. In contrast
, the community
option initially
started low similarly
at 12% just like specialist but then
increased to almost tripled each year, noting a stable increase to 32% and 58% in 2005 and 2009 respectively.
In conclusion, voluntary-controlled schools
dominated in the early year,
but were replaced by Remove the comma
apply
community
schools
. Grammar and voluntary decreased over time, specialists remain stable, yet community
schools
ruled in the chart.Submitted by twiggseducationbdg on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words schools, years, community with synonyms.
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