Public museums and art galleries are not necessary because nowadays people can see the historical objects and works of art in these places on the Internet. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some

people

think that public

museums

and

art

galleries

are not important to visit because they opine those things from the

places

can

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be seen on the

internet

.

Although

the

internet

could help

the

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people

to look

those

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at those

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objects virtually, I disagree with the statement of unnecessary as visiting

such

places

give a real

experience

Museums

and

art

galleries

are the place to see

the

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historical objects and fine

art

from

particularly

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people

.

In addition

, they are legitimated

places

to place the object which have value to give

a knowledge

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knowledge

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for

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to

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those who

interested

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are interested

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in. Since the

internet

is the common thing in

this

modern’s era,

people

tend to see

the

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objects on the

internet

but it does not give the actual

experience

and could be misleading

information

.

For example

, school nowadays carry out

a

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field trip to

the

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museums

by

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through

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virtual

experience

such

as

zoom

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meeting but eventually, the

information

and

experience

which

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desired

is

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are

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not fully obtained .

On the other hand

, the use of

internet

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the internet

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give

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gives

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advantages

for

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to

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people

who use it as the

internet

provides

convenient

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convenience

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and it is flexible without considering the time to travel

visit

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to visit

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such

places

as

museums

and

galleries

.

Moreover

, in technology era which become advanced over

times

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time

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,

people

can surf on

website

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websites

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to find the

information

that they want from

museums

and

galleries

just from their

gadget

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gadgets

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.

For instance

,

people

can access the

virtuality

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virtual

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museum in application to feel the

experience

.

However

, the atmosphere does not give the real

experience

.

To sum up

,

museums

and

art

galleries

are essential to

be exist

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exist

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because they offer an exclusive condition unlike in

virtual

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the virtual

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world and

also

the

information

obtained is more clear to visit physically than virtually.