Public museums and art galleries are not necessary because nowadays people can see the historical objects and works of art in these places on the Internet. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some
people
think that public
museums
and
art
galleries
are not important to visit because they opine those things from the
places
can
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be seen on the
internet
.
Although
the
internet
could help
the
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people
to look
those
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at those
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objects virtually, I disagree with the statement of unnecessary as visiting
such
places
give a real
experience
Museums
and
art
galleries
are the place to see
the
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historical objects and fine
art
from
particularly
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people
.
In addition
, they are legitimated
places
to place the object which have value to give
a knowledge
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knowledge
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for
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to
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those who
interested
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are interested
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in. Since the
internet
is the common thing in
this
modern’s era,
people
tend to see
the
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objects on the
internet
but it does not give the actual
experience
and could be misleading
information
.
For example
, school nowadays carry out
a
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field trip to
the
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museums
by
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through
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virtual
experience
such
as
zoom
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meeting but eventually, the
information
and
experience
which
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desired
is
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are
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not fully obtained .
On the other hand
, the use of
internet
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the internet
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give
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advantages
for
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to
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people
who use it as the
internet
provides
convenient
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and it is flexible without considering the time to travel
visit
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to visit
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such
places
as
museums
and
galleries
.
Moreover
, in technology era which become advanced over
times
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time
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,
people
can surf on
website
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websites
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to find the
information
that they want from
museums
and
galleries
just from their
gadget
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gadgets
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.
For instance
,
people
can access the
virtuality
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virtual
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museum in application to feel the
experience
.
However
, the atmosphere does not give the real
experience
.
To sum up
,
museums
and
art
galleries
are essential to
be exist
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because they offer an exclusive condition unlike in
virtual
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world and
also
the
information
obtained is more clear to visit physically than virtually.
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