The map show Southside,a shopping mall, as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the indormation by selecting and repoting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pictures display information on the present layout of a mega mall named Southside and its new scheme for the future.

This

writing highlights some changes that will happen to

this

shopping area,

along with

some comparisons on both maps.

Overall

, there are many changes that will happen in the renovation.

Although

there are some that remain, most are developed mostly on the east side of the location and the total of shops that are planned to be added. To start with, there will be two new main entrances on the left and on the right of the malls. The cafe in the west is going to be changed to an information centre.

Furthermore

, the northern parts where there is

play

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a play

the play

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area, noodle shop, and cinemas will be gone and replaced with new types of stores like

salon

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salons

show examples

, shoes, cosmetics, and gift

shop

Fix the agreement mistake

shops

show examples

. The main obvious changes happened in the east area where

fitness

Correct article usage

the fitness

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centre will be demolished into a car park, and the golf course and park will be used as an extension to the bigger Department Store.

Lastly

, the supermarket and the toilet remain the same.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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3 paragraphs

188 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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