Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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It is true that every household produces a growing/ increasing amount of rubbish on a daily basis. (Paraphrase) There are many reasons behind
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trend, but governments and societies should make much more effort to address
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issue.
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with, the
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have already collected
fees
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through
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many ways. All
spendings
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by residents would involve a
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of
acedemic
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academic
taxes
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. So the
students
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who are studying in private
schools
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have paid educational taxations on their
tuition
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example
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, if someone paid his
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tuition
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, a small
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of his
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would be possessed by the management which is work for
education
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.
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,
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private
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students
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do not get any knowledge or advantages from the public academic
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. The
students
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would be unwilling to pay money to
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authourities
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authorities
. The
families
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would suffer from more economic stress if
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ask
taxes
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from them. The
tuition
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fees
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of private
schools
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are more expensive than the
fees
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in
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the
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public
schools
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. Additional
fees
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may cause some financial
crisis
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crises
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to
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for
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specific
families
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.
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, their life
declines
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, which might lead to disappointment with
governmnets
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governments
government
.
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example
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, a poor family afford their kids to
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primary
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,
they
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and they
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have not only
pay
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the expensive fee from
schools
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, but
also
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the
taxes
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from
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state
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education
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system
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. They have to give up to let their kid go to
school
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.
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,
while
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it is necessary for the academic systems to receive some taxations, it is not reasonable to ask
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fees
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for fees
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from
the
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apply
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families
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which have children in primary educational systems.
To begin
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with, the
states
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have already collected
fees
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through
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in
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many ways. All
spendings
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spending
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by residents would involve a
part
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of
acedemic
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academic
taxes
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. So the
students
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who are studying in private
schools
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have paid educational taxations on their
tuition
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.
For
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example
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, if someone paid his
school
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tuition
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, a small
part
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of his
tuition
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would be possessed by the management which is work for
education
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.
In addition
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,
the
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apply
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private
school
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students
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do not get any knowledge or advantages from the public academic
system
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. The
students
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would be unwilling to pay money to
state
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authourities
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authorities
. The
families
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would suffer from more economic stress if
states
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ask
taxes
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from them. The
tuition
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fees
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of private
schools
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are more expensive than the
fees
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in
Change preposition
of
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the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
public
schools
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. Additional
fees
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may cause some financial
crisis
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crises
show examples
to
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for
show examples
specific
families
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.
Furthermore
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, their life
declines
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decline
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, which might lead to disappointment with
governmnets
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governments
government
.
For
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example
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, a poor family afford their kids to
the
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apply
show examples
primary
school
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,
they
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and they
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have not only
pay
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to pay
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the expensive fee from
schools
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, but
also
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the
taxes
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from
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state
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the state
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education
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system
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. They have to give up to let their kid go to
school
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. In conclusion, people’s new lifestyles and the rapid popularity of disposable products are the main culprits/reasons behind the larger amount of rubbish produced and actions should be taken along several fronts: through new legislation, improved enforcement, innovative technology and enhanced awareness to mitigate it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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