The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The following illustration depicts the
town
of Garlsdon (population is 65000 people) and two possible spots for the Use synonyms
supermarket
that will be built there. Use synonyms
Also
, the map shows 3 main roads and Linking Words
one
railway road that leads to other Hindon, Brandson and Cransdon.
Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
town
has 2 industrial destinations, Use synonyms
one
of them is located in the south and the second Use synonyms
one
in the north. The first destination for the new Use synonyms
supermarket
is located in the northern part of the Use synonyms
town
, in the countryside. In spite of the fact that Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
supermarket
is located in the countryside, there is not Use synonyms
such
a big distance between the Linking Words
supermarket
and housing. It is near to the Use synonyms
town
of Hindon, too.
The second location is in the Use synonyms
town
centre without any traffic zone. Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
one
is located in the southern. In Use synonyms
this
case, the Linking Words
supermarket
is near all 3 main roads and the railway. Use synonyms
Also
, I would like to mention that Linking Words
this
spot is located among the housing and between two industrial locations.Linking Words
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