The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The following illustration depicts the
town
of Garlsdon (population is 65000 people) and two possible spots for the supermarket
that will be built there. Also
, the map shows 3 main roads and one
railway road that leads to other Hindon, Brandson and Cransdon.
This
town
has 2 industrial destinations, one
of them is located in the south and the second one
in the north. The first destination for the new supermarket
is located in the northern part of the town
, in the countryside. In spite of the fact that this
supermarket
is located in the countryside, there is not such
a big distance between the supermarket
and housing. It is near to the town
of Hindon, too.
The second location is in the town
centre without any traffic zone. This
one
is located in the southern. In this
case, the supermarket
is near all 3 main roads and the railway. Also
, I would like to mention that this
spot is located among the housing and between two industrial locations.Submitted by Ayan on
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