You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
This
table illustrates the number
of students
who attended various kinds of secondary schools
from 2000 to 2009.
Overall
, the number
of students
in elementary school dropped significantly in the given time frame. However
, the number
of in community
schools
shows a rapid increase in percentage
.
In 2000, specialist schools
and community
schools
had the least number
of students
which is 12% whereas
, the voluntary-controlled schools
had the highest percentage
of students
which is 52% and grammar schools
had the second highest percentage
of 24%. Similarly
, in the year 2005 specialist schools
had the lowest percentage
of 11% and the voluntary schools
had 38% students
, however
, the community
schools
had 32% strength and grammar schools
got the lowest percentile.
On the contrary
, in 2009 community
schools
had the greatest percentage
of more than half of the student population which is 58%. The voluntary schools
took the second place with 20% of the students
, grammar and specialist schools
were 12% and 10% respectively.Submitted by z.ghadia on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, schools, community, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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