You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
This
table illustrates the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
students
who attended various kinds of secondary Use synonyms
schools
from 2000 to 2009.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
students
in elementary school dropped significantly in the given time frame. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
number
of in Use synonyms
community
Use synonyms
schools
shows a rapid increase in Use synonyms
percentage
.
In 2000, specialist Use synonyms
schools
and Use synonyms
community
Use synonyms
schools
had the least Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
students
which is 12% Use synonyms
whereas
, the voluntary-controlled Linking Words
schools
had the highest Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
students
which is 52% and grammar Use synonyms
schools
had the second highest Use synonyms
percentage
of 24%. Use synonyms
Similarly
, in the year 2005 specialist Linking Words
schools
had the lowest Use synonyms
percentage
of 11% and the voluntary Use synonyms
schools
had 38% Use synonyms
students
, Use synonyms
however
, the Linking Words
community
Use synonyms
schools
had 32% strength and grammar Use synonyms
schools
got the lowest percentile.
Use synonyms
On the contrary
, in 2009 Linking Words
community
Use synonyms
schools
had the greatest Use synonyms
percentage
of more than half of the student population which is 58%. The voluntary Use synonyms
schools
took the second place with 20% of the Use synonyms
students
, grammar and specialist Use synonyms
schools
were 12% and 10% respectively.Use synonyms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, schools, community, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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