You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types

between 2000 and 2009.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make

comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
This
table illustrates the
number
of
students
who attended various kinds of secondary
schools
from 2000 to 2009.
Overall
, the
number
of
students
in elementary school dropped significantly in the given time frame.
However
, the
number
of in
community
schools
shows a rapid increase in
percentage
. In 2000, specialist
schools
and
community
schools
had the least
number
of
students
which is 12%
whereas
, the voluntary-controlled
schools
had the highest
percentage
of
students
which is 52% and grammar
schools
had the second highest
percentage
of 24%.
Similarly
, in the year 2005 specialist
schools
had the lowest
percentage
of 11% and the voluntary
schools
had 38%
students
,
however
, the
community
schools
had 32% strength and grammar
schools
got the lowest percentile.
On the contrary
, in 2009
community
schools
had the greatest
percentage
of more than half of the student population which is 58%. The voluntary
schools
took the second place with 20% of the
students
, grammar and specialist
schools
were 12% and 10% respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, schools, community, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.

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