You recently visited a museum in your local town and you had a mixed experience. Write a letter to the museum’s manager. In your letter, – explain when you visited and what you saw – explain the positive parts of your experience and what you liked – explain the negative parts of your experience and give some advice for improvements.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my feedback about the

museum

which I have visited in

last

month. I recently moved to the neighbourhood of Oxford. I have visited the

museum

on August 30, 2023 . As a responsible citizen living in the same town, I thought that I would have to provide my feedback which might be useful. The antiques from the seventeenth century were educative and preserved well. The presentation of the artefacts was fabulous. The immersing art collections from the rulers in the historic period are arranged on the first floor of the

museum

is remarkable and well-managed. Officials in the

museum

were helpful and provided quick responses to all my queries.

However

, I have some suggestions for improvements. It would be better if you provided a short description of to antique items. The audio guide would be beneficial to understand the history of the materials and paintings. A coffee shop inside the

museum

would help visitors to take a break. Hope my feedback will be considered. I look forward to hearing from you, Yours faithfully Jennifer Onasis