You have recently been in a sports centre and noticed some issues in the changing rooms. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the centre and say – What was the problem? – Explain why it is bothering you. – Suggest a possible solution.

Dear Sir. Hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to express my dissatisfaction

for

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the changing room of the sports centre. And proving some suggestions to improve it.

To begin

with, there is no cleanliness, the floor is dirty and sticky ,there is no place to keep your stuff ,

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and the

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locker

are

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broken. Over and above there is no cross ventilation

and

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which

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makes us feel suffocating. The more concerning is

curtain

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the curtain

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placed to cover the changing room. That curtain is so thin and transparent , everything can be visible.

This

little bit frustrating for me as its concerning to once safety , privacy and hygiene. Here are some

suggestion

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to improve them,

firstly

you can keep

as

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them as

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a full

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full time

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cleaner ,

add

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and add

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some new lockers.

Moreover

, curtains can be replaced with

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apply

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doors. Thank you so much for

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time and consideration. Looking forward to

this

change. Yours faithfully, Stuti Sheth