Education should be accessible to people of all academic backgrounds. All levels of Education from primary school to tertiary Education, should be free. To what extend do you with this opinion?

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would say my mother is my first teacher and I get my free
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learn so many things from her that
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like to share,she taught me how to speak how to use pencils and crayons and I
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learned from her how to read from letters to words up to paragraphs and numbers.I was a product of Free
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in my country from elementary to secondary. In our place the school so far it not like
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walking distance we woke -up so early from 4am just to catch up our school bus.
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we will go to our respective rooms.
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concluded that free
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for each
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level because there
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knowlege
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knowledge
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achieve
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mind
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a better future
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free
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for everyone accessible
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessible
  • economic backgrounds
  • primary school
  • tertiary education
  • free education
  • fundamental right
  • social mobility
  • economic mobility
  • reduce inequality
  • financial barriers
  • educational opportunities
  • government funding
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