The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows the percentage of families who eat at fast diners in different frequencies in America from 2003 to 2013.
It is clear that
, on the one hand, the crowd who go to the fast dining room in the US once a week and once or twice a Linking Words
month
hold the dominant direction. Use synonyms
Then
the proportion of the community whom every day and never eating instant food took up the least. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the percentage layout was almost the same in the three recorded years, but there were Linking Words
also
some differences. Linking Words
For example
, in 2006, the proportion of the population who went to dinner once or twice a Linking Words
month
started falling to 25%, Use synonyms
while
in the same circumstance, the figure in 2013 showed the opposite tendency, with a rose to 33%.
The folk in 2003, 2006, and 2013 who went to fast restaurants every day, several times a week, and once a week had an increasing trend, fluctuating from the lowest of 4% to the highest point of 33%. And Linking Words
then
, in the same given years, the population proportion of once or twice a Linking Words
month
, a few times a year, and never eaten instant food began to fall from 30 % to 3%, but in 2013, we can see the opposite direction compare with other years in the number of eating fast food once or twice a Use synonyms
month
, with grown to 33%. Use synonyms
Last
, in 2006 and 2013, the figure for going to fast diners a few times a year and never going there were completely the same, with 15% and 3%.Linking Words
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