On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: * Describe the item you lost * Explain how you lost it. * Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter in connection with a

laptop

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. I lost

last

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weekend, which was under the travel insurance with your company. That was the ‘ HP A 23 ‘

laptop

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in a grey

color

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colour

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. It had been stolen

along with

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its bag, which was made up of brown leather and had a keychain with the letter 'M' on it. That bag

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contains some of my office files in a purple envelope. I am disappointed with the services I received, never have I seen

such

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an incident in a luxury setup. we stayed in the hotel 'Taj' Mumbai. In the evening, we decided to visit a beach so, I organized everything, and I surely recognized that I put my

laptop

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in the cupboard and locked the room's door as well.

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, when I came back, at 10 PM and started looking for my

laptop

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for some office work, I could not find it.

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I complained about

this

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to the nearest police station. I have travel insurance from your company. So it is my request to you that the investigation should be done on

this

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, and I must receive my amount as early as you can provide.

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only I will be able to purchase a new

laptop

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to do my projects. Hoping for your prompt action on

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, Yours faithfully, DKP

pateldhruvi038Sat Jun 22 2024

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coherence cohesion

Try to organize your ideas into clearer paragraphs, as each paragraph should contain a single main idea to enhance readability.

task achievement

Provide more details on the actions you want the insurance company to take, such as any specific forms or processes you need to follow.

task achievement

The tone of your letter is polite and formal, appropriate for a letter to an insurance company.

coherence cohesion

You included a clear greeting and closing which makes your letter well-structured and professional.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

228 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

valuable possession
insurance claim
misplace
irreplaceable
receipt
policyholder
reimbursement
coverage
claim number
deductible
documentation
authenticate
liability
premium
accidental loss
indemnity
beneficiary
contact details
substantiate
correspondence

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