You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You recently ordered an item that was advertised as having a discount from the normal price, but you have found that when you paid, you did not get the discount. Write to the company. In your letter •Explain that you did not get the discount •Tell them where you saw the discount advertised •Tell them what you would like them to do about the situation You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing with some concern about an item I recently purchased from your brand website. It was a new jacket and a hat. I ordered those items by following the instructions on the website.
The advertisement I saw on your company’s fan page that
buy
two items get a 20% discount from the normal price, for loyalty members with a discount code was sent to the text message. But I was surprised to find that my card was charged full price. I am pretty sure that I followed the full steps when making the order, including copying the code discount.
I am very satisfied with Change the verb form
buys
this
order, the jacket fits me well and the yellow hat is my favourite colour. Absolutely I do not wish to return it, but I would like the advertised 20% of the cost of items refunded to my card. I would be grateful if you could confirm me via my email or phone number as soon as possible.
Regards,
Mai HuongSubmitted by yeshomeclass on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite