In an era of globalization, some people think that studying abroad is the best way to attain a well-paid job while others believe other options are better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today's era, countries are connected because of globalization. Because of globalization, we can start our business in different countries. The argument that studying abroad is the finest way to get a well-paid job, is an argument
that is
both agreed and
disagreed with by many. The two sides of the argument will be thoroughly analyzed and discussed in Change preposition
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this
essay before drawing a reasonable conclusion.
on the first
hand, studying abroad is a good way to get lucrative jobs in any sector. There are several benefits that we are getting from companies. Correct word choice
other
For instance
, each country
has its own rule
for each Sector, they give salaries Fix the agreement mistake
rules
according to
their experience, not on their qualification. So, here we have one different reason that if people
learn studies in a broad they get the job and they got the salaries, according to
the economy of that Country
not as they some country
, for instance
, People
come to the USA because Currency Of USA is stronger than other and by doing this
they can help their back home
people
to make properties and spend money to buy things to make lifestyle better.
On the other hand
, many people
think that by doing study in our home
country
is good because we have fewer difficulties in our home
country
as compared to abroad for instance
if we are studying in our home
country
then
we do not have any tension in our expenses like home
rent or electricity bills or food expenses, nevertheless
in abroad people
have to pay rents for house and food which is also
affecting our salaries and we can save our money by living in our home
country
. however
we have the support of our families in all conditions, and we can make
good business in our Verb problem
do
home
countries by using some tips and tricks.
To conclude
, in this
world, people
are finding more worthy jobs that help them to complete their dreams and some people
go abroad ta
try their luck and some work hard to get success in their Change preposition
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home
country
, it depends upon the person's choice that to go for which way.Submitted by kauravneetdes1432 on
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