Even more people are interested in wearing fashionable clothes nowadays. Do you think it is a positive or a negative trend?

#people #clothes #trend

Fashionable

clothes

are one of the things that make people look good and gain their confidence. Many

clothes

retail companies release new

clothes

collections almost every month to create's people awareness and spend money on them. In my opinion,

although

trendy

clothes

would gain people's confidence, they still have negative impacts in the long term.

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Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

55 words

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

disposable income
drive innovation
diversity of styles
creative expressions
self-expression
empowerment
curate
personal image
confidence
environmental impact
pollution
waste
fast fashion
consumption pattern
environmental degradation
unethical labor practices
materialism
dissatisfaction
detrimental effects
personal finances
mental health

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Even more people are interested in wearing fashionable clothes nowadays. Do you think it is a positive or a negative trend?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.