Even more people are interested in wearing fashionable clothes nowadays. Do you think it is a positive or a negative trend?

Fashionable
clothes
are one of the things that make people look good and gain their confidence. Many
clothes
retail companies release new
clothes
collections almost every month to create's people awareness and spend money on them. In my opinion,
although
trendy
clothes
would gain people's confidence, they still have negative impacts in the long term.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • disposable income
  • drive innovation
  • diversity of styles
  • creative expressions
  • self-expression
  • empowerment
  • curate
  • personal image
  • confidence
  • environmental impact
  • pollution
  • waste
  • fast fashion
  • consumption pattern
  • environmental degradation
  • unethical labor practices
  • materialism
  • dissatisfaction
  • detrimental effects
  • personal finances
  • mental health
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